UC知道帮我看看我哪翻译的不对！英语高手进，机器勿扰！
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在制定学习计划时，我们应该记住两件事。第一，应该现实一些，不要企图干太多的事情。第二，好的计划要灵活一点。我们可以每周做些小的变动，但总的模式不变。
让我们当时间的主人，今天就开始我们的计划。
Time is important.everone has twlenty four hours everday.everyear has 365 days,Once we life disappear,
so it not come back .If we love life, we waste of time.we must control time. use time best is plan time.
In the formulation of learning plans,we must romenber two things.the first,Be realistic,don't attempt do many things.the serond,A good plan must be a little flexible . we have re-plan on a weekly,but the overall not change.
let we become times master, Start our plan at beginning of today.
(我翻译的很菜我知道，请前辈们多多指教。)
感觉表达有些不地道。这样改下是不是好一些
1.“每年有365天”There are 365 days a year.
2.“一旦我们生命中的一天消失，就再也不会回来”Once one day of our life has passed away,it won't come back anymore.
3.“掌握时间”用“control”不太恰当吧，换成manage our time好点
4.“使用时间的最好办法就是好好计划时间”The best way of taking advantage of time is to make a good plan.
5.“Be realistic,don't attempt do many things”两个分句少连词连接，可以加个“and”，“attempt”是及物动词，要接动词不定式，attempt to do
6.“我们可以每周做些小的变动，但总的模式不变”We could make some changes every week while the overall plan is unaltered.
7.“让我们当时间的主人，今天就开始我们的计划”Let us become the time master,and begin our plan today.
本人英语也是学习中，一点意见，仅供参考。
The time is very important. Everybody has 24 hours every day, every year has 365 days, once in our life's one day of vanishing, will again not come back. If we deeply love the life, should not waste the time. We should grasp the time. Period of revolution's best means are well the planned time. When formulation learning program, we should rem