帮我翻译一下下面得英文自我介绍越准确越好

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我叫CANDY,我今年二十岁,毕业于三亚市职业中学,我是三亚本地人,有两年的酒店工作经验,我很珍惜每次的工作机会,如果你能给我一个机会,我会做得很好。

my name is Candy,i am 20 years old .i am a locals of Sanya,a very beautiful aicent city.and I graduated from Sanya vocational high school.i have two years hotel work experience.it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview. i will be very apprecaited if you give this jod choice and i am sure that i can do very well.thank you

My name is CANDY, twenty-years-old this year, graduated from vocational school Sanya, Sanya locals I have two years of hotel experience, I treasure the opportunity to work every time, if you could give me a chance, I will done a good job.

My name is CANDY,twenty years old,graduated from the professional Middle School of Sanya city ,I am Sanya native people ,Two years of working experience in Hotel,I treasure every opertunity for work,so please give me a chance ,I will do a good job at it.
这是直译的。
我觉得这样安排下会更有逻辑性:
My name is CANDY,twenty years old。I was graduated from the professional Middle School of Sanya city ,I