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A fountain of youth
Red blood is full of our body
Our heart is filled with enthusiasm
Like red sun in summer
A fountain of youth came flooding back
As we are young
We are bravely, we are audacious and we are impulse easily
To our mind
Everyday is fresh and everything is hopeful
Our face possess youth smiling
The world is always good before us
We see no end to the landscape
New objects presenting themselves as we advance
As in setting out on delightful journey
We have found no abstacle and felt no disposition
And it seems that we can go on forever
We look round in a new world and feel in ourselves all the vigor
This is youth strength, which makes us amend for everything.

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