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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/31 23:16:10
Bhutan

This video shows us Bhutan is a strong traditional country, they have dragon culture and their belief is Buddhism. Most of country wants to develop faster; however, Bhutan wants to take slower. Their traffic is backward, they need traffic policeman to make the traffic smooth. They think globalization is a disaster to their life, so they almost don’t have TV and internet. They feed animals and protect their environment. Their government thinks that’s a value thing to do, so the queen often plant trees. In their culture, people think they should be happy, so they often take part in the religion activity and get happiness, and they have a big celebration for 25 years. In Bhutan, most of children need to learn their culture and they can make their traditional Crafts, they sold it in the market. They did well to protect their culture. Finally, TV comes to their life, some people think it damage to their life, but their king thinks Bhutan need the world.

I think

Most of country wants to develop faster

wants ---want

think one country development too fast will damage to their culture, because the goverment don't have enough energy to protect their culture. The best way to protect culture is though education, like Bhutan's children, they learn their culture very hard. also the goverment need to make some rules to protect culture, if not, you will lose some culture during the country development.