帮我改改语法拼写错误（高分）

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This is a anti-war book, the author used ironical way to write the war. There is no hero in the book, the leading actor was not a hero who was a weaknest man in the army. He shouldn’t in the army, he didn’t have any power to fight, he even didn’t escape when the enemy came. The writer didn’t like the character, so it can’t encourage the war. This book is about his experiences in the war, throught his experences readers can see how crule of the war. There were lots of people died in the war, people be killed in everywhere. The corrupted building can be seen in everywhere of the city, many innocent people and children were killed. There are two pictures of Dresden before and after bombing, they can shock the readers. Before the bombing, this was a flourishing and civilized city. After the bombing this beautiful city became a huge slaughterhouse, too many people died in the bombing. It was not a city, it was a wasteland. When the readers read the book will form a picture about the crule b

this is an anti-war...he shoudn't join in the army...he even escaped when...through his experiences...how cruel the war was...people were killed...before the bombing, it was...A large number of people died...it was not a city but a wasteland...that means we can cut down the war

以下是我改好的,根据句意还做了一些句子调整.请仔细看看吧.
This is an anti-war book, in which the author used ironical way to write the war. There is no hero in the book. The leading actor was not a hero but a weakest man in the army. He shouldn’t in the army, because he didn’t have any power to fight and even can’t escape when the enemy came. The writer didn’t like the character, so it can’t encourage the war. This book is about his experiences in the war, however, from his experiences readers can see how cruel the war is. In the war, there were lots of people be killed and died in everywhere. The corrupted building can be seen in everywhere of the city, many innocent people and children were killed. There are two picture