帮我看下这篇翻译对不对，谢谢了

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随着嵌入式技术的发展，如何让用户通过浏览器访问嵌入式系统中内置Web 服务器，以获取系统信息成为嵌入式系统设计的一个热点。web服务不但操作方便，而且可以实现对现场的远程监控, 甚至可以向监控设备发送指令，因此Web 服务在嵌入式系统中的实现具有重要的作用，由于嵌入式系统要求代码简练，执行效率高,性能稳定可靠等，因此选择合适的Web服务器显得尤为重要。本设计采用一款单任务的嵌入式Web 服务器Boa. 对Boa web服务器特点，如何搭建以及注意事项等进行了讨论, 在此基础上编写了后台cgi服务程序,对嵌入式设备中传感器采集到的数据通过网络和浏览器传递给用户，以使用户了解嵌入式设备的工作状态和采集到的信息。

With the development of embeded technology, how to permit the users to visit the built-in web server in the embeded system so as to obtain the system information has become a hot point of embeded system designing. With the features of convenient operation，remote control toward the work field and even sending orders to the monitoring equipment, the web server plays an important role in the realization of embeded system. Because the embeded system demands a simple code with a high executive efficiency and stable performance, users have to be cuatious enough to choose suitable web server. The design has adopted the embeded system Boa with simple task, and discussed the featur

With the development of embedding technology, how to permit users to visit the built-in web server in the embeded system so as to obtain the system information has become a hot point of embedded system design.
embed加ed应该是embedded, 但是要说embedding technology, users不是特指的, 因此不能用the users, embedded system, 不必说system designing, 用design也可以是名词

With the convenient operation features, you can remote control field work and even send orders to monitoring equipment. The web server plays an important role in the realization of the embedded system. Because the embedded system demands a simple code with high executive efficiency and stable performance, users have to be cuatious enough to choose a suitable web server.
中文逗号是不用在英语中的, With the features of convenient operation, 改成 With the convenient operation features; remote control前面加上主谓语yuo can; toward the work field改成field work; sending改成send; 删除monitoring equipment前的the; 删除high executive efficiency前的a, efficiency不可数; suitable