UC知道雅思口语考试哪位高手帮我参考下?
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My English name is kevin. My Chinese name is Lin Min, this name is given to me by my father, he wanted me to thinking agile and more intelligent. I come from Yangzhou City, Jiangsu Province, Yangzhou is a very clean and beautiful city, have access to UN-Habitat Environmental Award, loyal to invite you to enjoy our city. I have a happy family of five, with father, mother, brother, sister and me. Father is a businessman, my mother is a housewife, I think they are hard to pull our three children grew up, is not easy, I am grateful to them. I usually like to play basketball, play computer games, does not like to go out.
恩。。。揪几个语法问题，呵呵
He wante me to think 不是thinking
agile和intelligent都是形容词，这里应该用副词
Yangzhou 后面不需要加city
Yangzhou is a very clean and beautiful city, have access to UN-Habitat Environmental Award, loyal to invite you to enjoy our city. 这句你是想用非谓语吗？这个语法能用出来很好，不过你这句话的非谓用错了，建议你如果不确定还是用定语从句吧
爸爸妈妈把我们养大，动词可以用cultivate， pull sb grow up没有这种说法。
还有一些小错误，但是由于是口语，就不太苛责了。
同意楼上那位的说法，雅思口语自我介绍不用那么长，说下名字，顶多说个学校专业什么的就行了。
如果这是你抽到的题目，那你这篇口语我认为只能打5.5，词汇用得太简单，变化少，而且用词不地道，去看看英文电影或者报刊，学学native speaker的用词对你来说比较有用吧。
这是自我介绍吗? 是不是太长了,考试的时候没有这么长时间让你自我自我介绍的吧,就问几个简单问题马上就进入正题了
恩，不错的，练练熟，到时候尽量不要断，应该就可以啦~
楼主加油~