英语作文修改一下 求你们了

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There are a vast number of people like smoking. Not only the old, the adult, but also school students have been joined in smoking. However, smoking is harmful to one’s health, whether you are smoker or not. Therefore, many countries want to ban smoking in public. But in my opinion, smoking should not be banned in all public. I believe this for several reasons.
Although smoking is harmful to our body, it still has advantages for us. Now more and more pressure makes people depressing and nervous, and Cigarettes provide pleasure to smoker. Smoking is a good way to chase away pressure for someone. I do not think many non-smokers who like snacking, eating junk food or high calories food are healthier than chain-smokers. On the other hand, cigarettes also are useful when we involve in the society, since there are many smokers in Social Occasions. It is easier to talk to them with a cigarette in your hand. Everybody has the right to keep his or her habit. smoke is a usual habit for ma

There are a vast number of smokers in all age brackets. Smoking is harmful to humans' health. It affects smokers and people living around. Therefore, many countries proposed a law that prevents smoking in all public places (really? which country?). In my opinion, smoking should not be banned in all public. There are a few reasons to support my statement.

Although smoking is harmful to our health, it still has advantages for us. Firstly, pressure from working and family will make people depressed, but cigarette seems to give a better way of solution. Thereafter, Smoking is a good way to remove pressure. I do not think non-smokers who like snack, junk food or high calories food are healthier than smokers. On the other hand, cigarettes are also helpful when we communicate with other people in the society. It is easier to talk to them when you handle them a cigarette. Everyone has the right to keep his or her habit such as smoking.

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