看看这句英文 谢谢

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The god had decided who is your relative; Thank God we can choose our friends
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The god has decided who was your relative; Thanks God we can choose our friends
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The God HAS decided who is your relative.
ThankS God we can choose our friends.

改一个地方who are your relatives

神已决定谁是你的亲戚 ； 感谢上帝我们可以选择我们的朋友 顺呀

is 换成was吧 前后时态一致

had变成has,后半句前加个but

前面 had 后面就 is 了啊 这是一个错误
The god had decided who would be your relative
总感觉用decided不好 用foredoom吧 注定了你的亲戚是谁

后面也不是 变成中式了拉
Thank god for we can choose our friends
for不要忘了加啊