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When we enter the college ,the first thing we will meet is how to live. Living alone or living with roommates is worthy to be considered.
Some of us students hold the view that we should live alone. Their reasons are as follows. With living alone,they can decided when and how to get work done on their own,which means getting more private space in a way. In addtion, without the noise ,one can have a good rest in a quiet place. Besides,by living alone,we can develop the independence.
On the other hand,the others prefer living with roommates. A roommates may become a friend. One you can share the happiness and the sorrows with.Consequently,you can feel living at home, which make a real difference in easing your homesick. What’s more, sometimes we can figure something out together.
Personally,I would like to live with roommates. Nowadays,we need to learn to fit into this society. Be the change you want to see in the world. Thus, we
Living alone or living with roommates
When we enter the college ,the first thing we will [encounter] is how to live. Living alone or living with roommates is worthy to be considered.
Some of us students hold the view that we should live alone. Their reasons are as follows. [When] living alone,they can [decide] when and how to get work done on their own,which means getting more private space in a way. In [addition], without[the去掉] noise ,one can have a good rest in a quiet place. Besides,by living alone,we can [develop the independence, 搭配不当。 develop independent skill].
On the other hand,the others prefer living with roommates. A roommate[s去掉] may become a friend. [Once] you can share the happiness and the sorrows with [him/her].Consequently,you can feel [living去掉] at home, which make a real difference in easing your homesick. What[is 书面语不缩写] more, sometimes we can figure something out together.
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