这个句子正确么？once...

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Once setting a goal, she will try her best to achieve it.

我不想说once she set a goal, she will try her best to achieve it.觉得有点罗嗦。那么第一句话正确么？请给出负责任的回答。谢谢~

四楼的什么it不要啊？那she tries to achieve什么啊？
参考一下2楼

Once having the goal set

最好是 once having set a goal 因为是先定好了目标，才能努力

可以的，主动的就应该用动名词。

完全正确。楼主的语感还是不错的。

Once setting a goal, she tries her best to achieve, "it"不需要