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Today,I'd like to talk about a electronic gadget which is pretty precious for me,that is,my Sony digital camera.It is a birthday present given by my parents at my age of 20.In terms of its appearance,it's got a sleek black body,a 3 inch LCD screen, which is large and clear.What's more,another function of it is touch-screen control,I think it 's cool.
Because of its small size,it seems light and pretty handy,most importantly,the color of picture which is taken by my Sony is really accurate.I mean,the picture looks fabulous.
(However,I lost my Sony last year,it was stolen when I took the bus.Believe it or not,I totally depressed for a whole month,because it is a present that my parents give me.Afterwards,my BF and I,pinching and scraping for almost a year,and repurchase another one as same as the former one.Despite that,I still feel a little bit guilty when I remembered the day I was given this present from my parents,and I never forgot the words they told me:Re

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It's a present given by my parents on my 20th birthday.
What's more,it has the touch-screen control function, which I think is cool.
seems-> is
the color of the pictures taken by my Sony is really accurate
it was stolen when I took a bus.
Believe it or not,I got depressed for a whole month. Because it was a present my parents gave me.
Later on,my BF and I,pinching and scraping for almost a year, rebought one the same as the former one.(你小小年纪就和男朋友省吃俭用，还真辛苦啊~~)
Despite that,I still feel a little bit guilty when I recalled the day I was given the present. And I will never forget the words they told me:Record every happy scene of your life.
fill the photos with my special thoughts,special thoughts of my wonderful life

i got totally depressed for a whole month
pinching and scraping for almost a year for the repurchase of another one, as same as the former one
record every happy shot of your life