帮我看看这句英语.

It is the right people at right ages, at the right time. Why not take advantage of it?

take advantage of it: 利用

adventure: 冒险，投机

说说你想表达什么。。

只看出来，最好不要用people，用person比较恰当。
Since you met the right person with right ages in the right time, why not have a adventure?
弄成组合句，可能会好一点。