UC知道Could you help me?is there any solecism to the passage below?thank you!
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I wish blessedness always around you,however,you have to keep your eyes bright as snow.Don't be afraid,let it come,bravely.Let it be if we find we have lost.good luck,girl.
我是想知道，这短话有任何的语法错误吗？或者有更好的表达方式吗？有追加分哦。
我是想知道，这短话有任何的语法错误吗？或者有更好的表达方式吗？有追加分哦。
I wish blessedness will always be around you. However, you have to keep your eyes as bright as snow. Don't be afraid, let it come, and face it bravely. Let it go if we find what we have lost. Good luck, girl.
我希望幸福永伴你左右，然而，你必须得保持一双如白雪一样雪亮的眼睛。不要畏惧，放马让它过来吧，勇敢点儿。如果我们真的迷路啦那就面对现实吧。祝你好运，女孩。