麻烦 帮我 做一下 这个短文改错、谢谢

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I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our 76．
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. 77．
Clever as she is ,but she words very hard .We have a 78．
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening she 79．
told me that something happened when her parents was out . 80．
She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81．
she smelt something burning.Shen stopped look out 82．
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 83．
of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate .Ten 84．
minutes later ,the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor 85．
was very thankful for her help.

76 whose
77正确
78but去掉
79on改成 in
80was改were
81one改on
82stopped to look
83find改found
84 immediately
85put out the fire

76 who’s改为whose
77the后加most
78but去掉
79on改为in
80something后加was
81homeworks改为homework
82stopped后加to
83find改为found
84immediate改为immediately
85out后加the

have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our 76．---whose------
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. 77．--and is----------
Clever as she is ,but she words very hard .We have a 78．--Clever though-----------
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening she 79．(on---in)
told me that something happened when her parents was out . 80． (was----were)
She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81． (homeworks-----homework)
she smelt something burning.Shen stopped look out 82． (stopped -------stopped t