求高手帮忙改篇英语作文

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/11 02:51:53
This is a very interesting cartoon of two football player in game episode. attack player worried about the goal-keeper much strong.but the goal-keeper feeling yourself very small. This cartoon obviously aims at revealing a common and thought-provoking phenomenon: people always are short of confidence.
Why is it the case?the answers seems self-evident.In Chinese traditional culture,nobody can stress modesty too much. therefore,we always show the face of modest,no matter where and what time.so that we lose confidence. take chinese football as an example.as is known to us all,nowadays,chinese football have difficulty to obtain qualification to join the world cup. but in 2002 we are take party in the Japan-korea world cup. beacuse of the team has the support of whole chinese. however,present chinese football increasingly failure,because chinese football team has modesty feeling and worried failure. we know,if one team wanted promote skills,then must be trained with strong team.but the

汗~我十分怀疑这是中文拿到网上去直接机器翻译的……还不如给我中文原文来翻译呢。而且有些地方好像说不通……
见下。原文也贴上去了，括号内是我修改的。
还有一个问题，你想说的究竟是谦虚，还是卑微？我看你一直用modest,这是个褒义词，是谦虚。如果是卑微就用humble.看你想表达什么了。

This is a very interesting cartoon of two football player in game episode. attack player worried about the goal-keeper much strong.but the goal-keeper feeling yourself very small.

（This is a very interesting cartoon about two football players in the football match. During this match, the offensive player was worrying that the goal-keeper of the opposing team was very strong. However, this goal-keeper was feeling that he himself was very weak.）
这是一部有趣的动画，关于2个足球运动员。进攻方球员觉得对方守门员很强，但这个守门员却觉得自己很弱。（我是这样理解的，下同）
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This cartoon obviously aims at revealing a common and thought-provoking phenomenon: people always are short of confidence.
OK，不用修改。
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