帮忙改改我自己的翻译,就三句话。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/05 06:47:41
“我很想申请贵校电子工程的PhD,但是我的GRE分数未达到你们的最低要求,那么如果我申请了的话有可能被你们考虑录取吗?”

我自己写的,帮我改改完善,不必逐字,达意为先:
I intend to apply PhD program in EE at University of XXX. But my GRE score do not reach your minimum requirement. So if I apply your program, do I have any chance to be considered as your recruit?

I intend to apply to PhD program in EE at University of XXX. But my GRE score does not reach your minimum requirement. So will I have any chance to be considered as your recruit if I apply to your program ?

改动了一下,更地道一些……建议楼主不要按中文的思想翻译英文句子哦……有时候顺序要调换一下

注意:apply to 加机构,组织等

I would like to apply for your school of electronic engineering PhD, but my GRE score does not meet your minimum requirements, then if I applied for, then there is likely to be admitted do you consider