英语作文,帮我改一下,谢谢

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写一写从小学以来你的生活变化的情况
Before primary school, use my mother's words that I am a child that always makes her bad headache because I love to make jokes on others very much. After I going to primary school, I meet many classmates and teachers. They all make me interested. After long time, I stop making joke on others. I try to learn more things from my teacher. I think that Mrs. Wang, who is our art teacher, is very wonderful and magic. She can perform paper into different forms as dogs, cats, five-angle stars and so on. I admire on her very much. My mother is very happy. As she said that I changed. I become to be a good and clever child. My life has changed since primary school. I love my primary school and thanks it.

修改一下,也可以帮我加一点东西,谢谢 75字就够了

I used to live with my parents. Now I have to find time to visit them at weekends. I used to wear glasses. Now my eyes have become better. I can work without glasses.
I used to like short hair. Now, I don’t mind it.

Before primary school, in my mother's words I was a child that always made her upset because I loved making jokes on others very much. When I was in primary school, I met many classmates and teachers. They all made me happy. After a long time, I stopped making jokes on others. I tried to learn more things from my teachers. I though that Mrs. Wang, who was our art teacher, was very humorous and funny. She could change paper into different things,such as dogs, cats, five-angle stars and so on. I admired her very much. My mother was very happy.She said I had changed a lot. I had become a good and clever child. My life had changed since primary school. I love my primary school.