大家看看这个英语作文又没语法错误，帮忙修改下，谢

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Hi!My name is YeyiFan.Today is sept.10th,Today is teacher's day.I am not happy.Because I computer is out of work. today is not my day.

Hi!My name is YeyiFan.Today is Sept.10th,and it is teacher's day.I am not happy.Because my computer is out of work. Today is not my day.
改动了一点，你对比一下就知道了

1..YeyiFan--Ye Yifan
2..sept.--Sept.
3..teacher's--Teachers'
4.. I computer --my computer
注意大小写，细节问题，不要偷懒哦

注意大小写，有点少，在扩大点就好了~~