UC知道修改下英语作文
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/06 12:19:07
After the 2008 Beijing Olympics .Beijing become more ande more beautiful. There are more trees and grass in Beijing now. They make us very happy.And there are more and more visitors come to Beijing, they all want to know what does the capital of China look like.
Frome now on, We should improve our environment, make Beijing more clean and more nice . We should also often do exercise to keep ourselves fit .
Let's make beijing nicer and nicer together. I belive we can do it .
语法错误请指出 不当地方也请修改 谢谢
1. The 29th Olumpics has been over.
29届奥运会应该是 The 29th Olumpic Games
2. Do you know what does beijing look like now after that?
做好用 after it.
3. let me it for you.
句子不通顺，不明白要说什么，似乎想表达“让我给你描述一下”？那么可以这样说：Let me describe it to you, 或者：Let me tell you about it.
4. After the 2008 Beijing Olympics .Beijing become more and more beautiful.
建议改为： Beijing has become more and more beautiful since the 2008 Beijing Olympic .
5. There are more trees and grass in Beijing now. They make us very happy.
合成一句更有文采：There are more trees and grass in Beijing now making us very happy. （用的是句型 there be ... doing ...）
6. And there are more and more visitors come to Beijing,
正好是上面括号中提供的那个句型，所以come用动词原形式错误的，改为：coming to Beijing。如果为避免与上句雷同，可以改为定语从句：who come to Beijing
7. they all want to know what does the capital of China look like.
what does the capital of China look like是 know的宾语