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Duckling Storm
Local dog attacked the duckling, Little girl brokenhearted.
A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after. This ducking belongs to a local girl called Adeline; she loves the duckling so much that she had spend most of her time with the duckling , therefore she named the duckling PLT stand for precious little treasure.
Unfortunately the duckling was killed by dog Jackie,
But that’s not all; Adeline’s father caused PLT’s death because he wants to test dogs obedient.
After the innocent duckling had been killed, little girl Adeline was brokenhearted. She helped PLT to hold a funeral with her third brother Gregory.
Investigation：
From this event, we have carried on a series of investigations on 20 pedestrians.
96% of pedestrians say that it is fathers fault， he should know want is going to happen before he act it, and he should cares abo
。。。原来是要看语法。。。翻译了半天。。。
有不少错误啊~不过为了尊重你原本的意思，我没给你改内容，只是纠正语法和逻辑错误哦
还有，感觉那位把你的文章删的好狠。。。总之语法就这样差不多啦~~
1.Local dog attacked the duckling, Little girl brokenhearted
local和little前都应该加冠词a，duckling前也应加a而不是the，brokenhearted是形容词，前面应该有was。
2.A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after。This ducking belongs to a local girl called Adeline
jackie前应该加一个named，而且这句话太罗嗦，改成定语从句吧，A duckling which belonged to a local girl called Adeline was attacked by a local dog named Jackie.
3.she loves the duckling so much that she had spend most of her time with the duckling
had去掉，这只是在叙述过去的事，不要用过去完成时。整篇文章是过去时，loves和belongs好像不对。
4.therefore she named the duckling PLT stand for precious little treasure.
stand改成standing，是非谓语动词
5.Unfortunately the duckling was killed by dog Jackie
dog前加THE，JACKIE去掉
6.But that’s not all; Adeline’s father caused PLT’s death because he wants to test dogs obedient.<