请英语高手帮我修改英语作文

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各位高手，本人是一名初中生，英语语法不是很好，恳请高手帮我修改一下我的英语作文，不用全部改掉，指出错误点就可以了 先在这里谢谢了

I have a best friend

When i was 2 years old,I knew her.Her name is Dile.She was very obedient and she liked to eat.(but she is thin).She liked reading books.We were good friends.But the good scence isn't long,her parents and my parents were unfriendly.Her and i were very unhappy.
Luckly,in 2005,a summer holiday,i went to swimming pool and go swimming,i saw to her.we were exciting.Since the day,we were together 2 months,so webecome a best friend.
But now,we already 3 years not meets,I just want to say :I miss you,and i love you forever.You always my best friend.

1 she liked eating
she liked to 指的是想要做 而like doing 指的是喜欢做
2 she and i were both unhappy 她做主语 用主格形式
3 i went to swim 就行了
4 I saw her 不加to
5 we were excited 一般这种词 ing指的是另你兴奋的 ed 是你自己兴奋
6 Since that day 好点
7 we were together 2 months不对 可以改成 we enjoyed a happy life for two monthes 注意moth 复数加es
8 so we become a best friend.把a 去掉
9 we already 3 years not meets 改为we have not seen each other for 3 years
10 You always my best friend. 应该是you are my。。。。。。

I WISH YOU CAN MEET HER AND TELL HER ALL THIS SOMEDAY^_^

1.话说obedient这个词你是怎么懂的，我都还是上了高中才知道；
2.she liked reading books改成 she likes reading就够了，book多余；
3.but the good science isnt long………………典型的chinglish，好景不长，good days didnt last；
4.去游泳就直接i went swimming就可以了，还有，看见就saw her，to也是多余；
5.3年不见，we havent met for 3 years；
其他错误还有，一时间还没想好怎么改，就这些吧。