用英语介绍自己。帮忙看一下有没有什么错误。

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Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and i eat it everyday.But i never drink milk,i think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for my health.
My favorite sports are running.And my favorite color is bule.
I like talking to people,so i have lots of friends,i am very happy.

Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and I eat them every day.But I never drink milk,I think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for my health.
My favorite sport is running.And my favorite color is bule.
I like talking to people,so I have lots of friends,I am very happy.

还不错,望继续努力。

Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and i eat them everyday.But i never drink milk,i think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for my health.
My favorite sports is running.And my favorite color is bule.
I like talking with people,so i have lots of friends,i am very happy.

Hello, everyone! ...vegetables, and I eat them(不是it)... drink milk.(要用句号) I think it's awful,but my mother... My favorite sport is running, and my favorite color ...friends.(句号) I am very happy.

其他的都OK!

1.所有的i改为I,