初二英语作文 写得好多加分

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1 暑期将至,同学们将自己的暑假生活安排进行交流,请你用英语向Mr Brown介绍有关情况和自己的暑假计划
内容包括以下要点:(1)有的同学计划在家中多读书,为将来的学习做准备(2有的同学打算外出旅游,放松一下(3)有的同学准备参加体育锻炼,保持身体健康(4)谈谈自己的暑假安排,字数不限
2向遇到汶川地震失去双亲和同学的笔友王强写信,用上提示词,可适当发挥,词数60-80,开头已给出
提示词:lose one's life,be brave,talk with,get help from,sleep well,take exercise ,relax yourself,smile at life

Dear Wang Qiang,
I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in Wenchuan______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
zhou hua

Although many people lost life ,but your courage really impressed me a lot.If you meet something gloomy,do not hesitate to tell me, i promise i will try my best to help you. Besides ,taking some exercises can help you sleep well and feel more relaxed. I hope you can smile at life,"tomorrow is another day ",isn't it?
Come on!

两篇才10分啊。。。。。。神啊

你少进行修改,避免用自己不会或不熟悉的语句,句式,词与词之间的空档要刚刚好,如果你的积累好,多用一些有把握正确的没学过的语句,就能拿高分了(这篇我们刚好写过)