英语错误,请大家帮我修改

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/23 17:46:22
1}It tells an adventure of a little boy named David turns to be a man.这句话错哪。。。
2}The story is filled with suffering, and many of the situations are taken straight from the British writer- Chares Dickens’ own life.这句话有错吗?
3}It’s love(that) makes world the better place。同上,为什么需要加that
4}以上两条建议我觉得对90后很重要,英语怎么翻,除了下句还有没有更好的
These two opinions above are what I think it valuable for the 90 generations.
问题有点多,所以悬赏00分,大家能帮多少帮多少
十分感谢,麻烦大家了。
这是要参加比赛的,很紧急,。。。。

1.turns改为turning
2.suffering后最好加上s,指具体的很多痛苦和磨难,不加的话是指抽象意义上的痛苦磨难。然后狄更斯名字正确写法应该是Charles Dickens
3.强调句型嘛,it is...that。that肯定不能省。后面的the应该改为a
4.我的翻译版本(仅供参考):I think the two proposals above are very important to those who were born in the 1990s.

1.turns---turned
2.没错
3.这种THAT的定语从句不是随便省略THAT的,情况太多了,解释很麻烦,这种情况不省略
4.i think these two tips above are valuable for the kids borned after 1990
还有问题再补充吧