这篇英文有没有错

Want to shout you
But didn't dare to speak
Finally only
See you walk with tears
I want to ask me
Whether it is willing to let go
Since can't stay
To accept
Henceforth
How long will you lonely
Who can give you
I like the gentle
Perhaps is overrated
I'll have you left more happiness
But for the weak
Memory is enough
After the separated
Whenever I think of you
Will lower the head
Hold on
Don't last long
I believe you
There will also be like sad sad
All who ever loved
How willing
After you left
To be happy and is a kind of demand
A man
What ever is sorrow
Understand
But can let you stay for me
Finally only regret
Pull me not to let go

我直接改了部分：

Want to shout at you
But didn't dare to speak
Finally only
See you walk with tears
I want to ask myself
Whether I am willing to let go
Since I can't stay
To accept
Henceforth
How long you feel lonely
Who can give you
the gentleness like I do
Perhaps it's overrated
I'll have you left more happiness
But for the weak
Memory is enough
After the separated
Whenever I think of you
Will lower the head
Hold on
Don't last long
I believe you
There will also be like sadness
All who ever loved
How willing
After you left
To be happy and is a kind of demand
From a man
What ever is sorrow
Understand
But can let you stay for me
Finally only regrets
Pulls me not to let go

因为看着原文读不出部分句子的中文意思
有中文就更好了

How long will you lonely

alone应该是。。。

你这个是诗啊。。。本来就不太讲究语法。。。