帮帮我看看这段祝福有没有什么错误。。谢谢了！

Although this doll is neither gorgeous, nor exquisite,or valuable.
Anyway, even if it's simple and poor. It expresses my most hearfelt benediction for you, my precious friend Vivi
I sincerely bless you be happy, healthy, and beautiful forever.
and also achieve an excellent mark in the final examination.
I usually dream of the day we fly to American together.
And always remember, take care of yourself and be happy.
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although this doll is not gorgeous, not exquisite,not valuable ，just simple and poor,
it expresses my truely heartfelt benediction to my precious friend Vivi.
I sincerely bless :happy, healthy and beautiful forever.
And achieve an excellent mark at the end of the year.
Dreaming of the day when we fly to America together.
Remember to take care of yourself and be happy.

1、大小写要注意，America应该对啊
2、I sincerely bless you will be happy,healthy and beautiful forever.
3、and achieve an excellent