请问这句话有语法问题嘛..？

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I have worked for you for many years and I would work for you still but I am too old. Do not be unkind to the old but remember what good work the old did when they were young.

这是一个小故事里的点睛之笔...希望不要有语法上的问题...

分不多 谢谢大家了！

I have worked for you for many years and I still would like work for you but I am too old for that .Please be nice to the old,and remember what good jobs they ever did as well, when they were young.

最大的问题，but 用的不对。这里要么用and. 要么用because + 原因上去remember.

其他地方还好，就是有点绕。感觉说不清的地方，就分2句说。长句不一定是好。

I have been working for you for...

别的正确

第一行的would 要改成will

我觉得没 问题！ 这篇文章是以整体过去时写的，一楼 2楼的 说的好像不对吧?

I have worked for you for many years and I would still work for you if I am not too old. Do not be unkind to the old but remember their contributions when they were young.