UC知道英语语法错误检查
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I think many of us have our favorite stars. When we see them, some of us （may happy to crazy）. In the daily life of the stars, they always keen to go out with a pair of faddish sunglasses. We can see many stars （in the news of the outdoor photos）, whether （attend ）some formal activities or （go） for a walk, mostly is wearing sunglasses. （Like the famous singer Madonna always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
加括号的地方语法是不对的，怎么改啊
When we see them, some of us （may be happy to crazy）.句子要有谓语
We can see many stars （in the news on the outdoor photos）, whether （attending）some formal activities or （going） for a walk, mostly is wearing sunglasses. 注意介词,动名词
（Like the famous singer Madonna, she always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
句子要有主语
I think most of people have their favorite stars . When we see these stars , some of us will be happy and crazy for this
...... we can see many stars` photos of their daily life . whether attending ....going for a walk , most of them are wearing sunglasses such as a famous ..... 不要后面的always wear...多于了 而且always后面接的是动名词
用我这个 其实你错的地方很多
想说 根本就没有高兴的发疯了 may be happy to crazy这种用法 完全chingenglish
另外i think many of us have our favorite stars. When we see them, some of us （may happy to crazy）.
你前两句话 第二句话有个them 这个them根本就指代不明确 必须得说清楚当我们见到谁 外国人就是这样 不能跳跃思维太明显