这句英语有没有错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/18 15:18:16
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact ,increasing number of college students doing part-time jobs.
如果上面错了，请问该怎么改，fact后还要保留和我一样的名词形式的
by the way，说些同位语从句，不是跟从句的那种

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact ,increasing the（这里的the不可省略） number of college students （to do）doing part-time jobs

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that the number of college students doing part-time jobs is increasing

Nobody could fail to notice the fact of increasing number of college students having part-time jobs.

1. increasing 是形容词，增加的，增大的。来形容 number
2. 不必要用could have failed。除非你有明确的时间从句表示这句话讲的是在某时间之前。
3。 是 having part-time jobs. 又如 have a job, have a part-time job, 不是 do part-time jobs.

fact 后面是冒号吧？是的话在students后加上are