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Nowadays, advertisements have become a part of our daily lives. We can see them almost everywhere, on television, in newspapers, in magazines and so on. Though we don’t like them, we can not avoid them.
You may have seen this advertisement.
It’s about a fat man and a black man. The fat man has just ended long-distance running, leaning against his car to have a rest. The black man driving a truck, listening to music and eating chocolate, comes. When he sees the fat man before, the black man decided to help him……
It’s amusing, isn’t it?
It’s mentos’ advertisement! Did you guess it?
And this is not a real advertisement. It comes from NARUTO. Can you guess what it advertises?
Look at these! Do not you think they are interesting?
In a way, some advertisements can be called works of art. They are attractive and has a unique expression. However, when you enjoy these advertisements, do you know something about Advertising competition?

广告最好都改成被动态
The black man driving a truck, listening to music and eating chocolate, came. When he saw the fat man before, the black man decided to help him……

最后一段
They are attractive and have unique expressions. 复数

大致看了一遍 没什么问题 加油

Advertisement
Nowadays advertisements have become a part of our daily lives. We can see them almost everywhere, such as television, newspapers, magazines and so on. Though we don’t like them, we can not avoid them.
You may have seen this advertisement.
It’s about a fat man and a black man. The fat man has just ended long-distance running, leaning against his car to have a rest. The black man driving a truck, listening to music and eating chocolate, comes. When he sees the fat man in font, the black man is deciding to help him……
It’s amusing, isn’t it?
It’s mentos’ advertisement! Did you guess it?
And this is not a real advertisement. It comes from NARUTO. Can you guess what it advertises?