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我爱英语
当我8岁的时候，我开始学习英语。我与其他儿童一起打游戏和唱英语歌曲，有时候，我会观看英语卡通片。它很有趣。接着我发现语言的美丽，开始了我在英语世界里丰富多彩的的梦。
我希望总有一天我能够在世界各地旅游。我要到美国华盛顿访问，因为我的一个哥哥是在那里。当然，我要到伦敦，因为英国是英语语言的发源地。如果我能在剑桥大学骑上我的自行车，我会很高兴的。
我希望我能够与世界上每一个人说流利的英语。同时，我对他们来介绍一下中国，如长城和苏州园林。我会教世界人民了解我们国家美丽的语言。
我喜欢英语。学英语实在是太好了。曾经我想成为一名英语教师。我也喜欢中国文学。当我小的时候，我能记住大量的诗歌。我也想成为一名语文教师。现在我认为我的梦想可以成真：我将能够使用英语教外国朋友中文和与他们分享中华文化。使越来越多的人们将能够结识五千年的历史文化，繁荣我们伟大的中国。
我的未来不是梦。我深信它会成真。
翻译成：I love English
When I was 8 years old, I started to learn English. I am with other children playing games and singing English songs, and sometimes I will watch English cartoons. It is very interesting. Then I discovered the beauty of language began in my English-speaking world where rich and colorful dreams.
I hope someday I can travel around the world. I would like to go to Washington to visit, because my elder brother was there. Of course, I am going to London because Britain is the birthplace of the English language. If I can ride m
第1段
都该改成过去式吧，都是过去的事了
最后一句改成Then I discovered the beauty of language and I began my colorful dreams in the English-speaking world.这是我的个人意见，你看看这样是否更好，因为你的原句肯定是有问题的。
第2段第一行改成I would like to pay a vist to Washington你看是不是更好？还有第2行应该是is there,现在还在的吧？
第3段第2行 I Will teach
第4段第2行When i was young,I could，I also wanted to都是过去的事了吧
第5行Making more and more people be able to...
这些改了应该差不多完美了吧 哈哈
如果选我最佳答案要加分哈 哈哈
这是偶翻译的
I love English
When I was 8 years old, I started to learn English. I am with other children playing games and singing English songs, and sometimes I will watch English cartoons. It is very interesting. Then I discovered the beauty of language began in my English-speaking world where rich and colorful dreams.
I hope someday I can travel around the world. I would like to go to Washington to visit, because one of my elder brother was there. Of course, I am going to London because Britain is the birthplace of the