高手帮忙看下我的翻译,送国外的推荐信,不能乱来的

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/20 00:28:02
Being a professor in Shanghai Finance and Economics University, I had given six lectures to Hua Sheng as an auditing teacher when she studied accountancy there as her second major, and had been her supervisor when she worked as an intern in my credit rating company. She had listened to me so attentively that many of the cases we studied in class were applied to her work effectively.

I was really impressed by Hua Sheng’s performance during her five-week internship. In order to be more competent in the field of credit rating, she volunteered to assume more tasks, and further offered to work overtime with other regular employees. However hard the tasks were, she always managed to fulfill them with flying colors. Such devotion to her career even as an intern is rarely seen in her peers. As she had done well in her accounting major, with an average score of 85 for the core courses, in addition to her remarkable learning ability, Hua Sheng was capable of doing some of the basic bu

是不是先把SHENGHAI这个名字放在最前面,然后再提及你是谁会好一点,突出重点。
要不是看中文,乍一看我还以为是你自己的推荐信呢。

不知说的对不对,见笑!