我的P.S(个人陈述),麻烦各位大虾帮忙润色一下,急啊~~~~~~~~~

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下面是我的P.S(个人陈述),可能有一些单词和语法不当,麻烦各位大虾帮忙润色一下,急啊~~~~~~~~~谢谢各位了!!!
Be born in the cuntryside, I was interested in controlling rural bioenvironment when I was very young. but the fact is that it was difficult for the man whose major was agriculture or related to get a decent job then ,so i was forced to enrolled in the major of machine&manufacture and their automation while entering in university.

In the university ,I found that it’s so anguished to do what I don’t like. I had no interest listening to the specialized courses, so was other courses. During my freshman year, I didn't work hard, the notion switching major suffered me time after times, in my sophomore, some students often talked about studying abroad, I thought it may be a good chance to transfer my major, I hunt the projects many universities provided to the graduates in the internet, finnally I found professor Dr.Larson in your department did research in controlling of biology environment, so I thought my opp

I was born in the cuntryside. I was interested in controlling rural bioenvironment when I was very young, but the fact is that it is difficult for the people whose major is or related to the agriculture to get a decent job then. So I was forced to enroll in the major of machine building & the automation after admission to the university.

In the university,I found that it’s so anguished to do what I don’t like. I had no interest in the specialized courses, so was other courses. During my freshman year, I didn't work hard, the notion switching major suffered me time after times. In my sophomore, some students often talked about studying abroad, and I thought it may be a good chance to transfer my major. I hunted the projects in many universities which could provid with the graduates in the internet, finnally I found professor Dr. Larson in your department which makes research on controlling of bioenvironment. I thought my opportunity was coming, and it’s possible that