哪位帮忙修改一下p.s(个人陈述) 谢谢了！！

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Be born in the cuntryside, I was interested in controlling rural bioenvironment when I was very young. but the fact is that it was difficult for the man whose major was agriculture or related to get a decent job then ,so i was forced to enrolled in the major of machine&manufacture and their automation while entering in university.

In the university ，I found that it’s so anguished to do what I don’t like. I had no interest listening to the specialized courses, so was other courses. During my freshman year, I didn't work hard, the notion switching major suffered me time after times, in my sophomore, some students often talked about studying abroad, I thought it may be a good chance to transfer my major, I hunt the projects many universities provided to the graduates in the internet, finnally I found professor Dr.Larson in your department did research in controlling of biology environment, so I thought my opportunity is coming, it’s possible that I studied after her in my f

As a country boy, I was interested in controlling rural biotic environment. But my parents believed that it would be difficult for agriculture major or agriculture-related major to find a decent job after graduation, therefore, I was reluctant to choose the major of Machine& Manufacture and Their Automation when accepted by the university.

In the university，I found how anguished it was to do what I don’t like. I had no interest in the specialization courses, neither in other courses. During my freshman year, I didn't work hard since the notion of switching from my major to another one afflicted me again and again. In my sophomore year, I thought studying abroad may be a good chance for me to shift my major. Since then, I hunted the projects provided to the graduates by the universities on the Internet. Finally I found professor Dr.Larson in your department did research in controlling of biotic environment successfully. At that moment, I thought my new opportunity woul