■【汉译英】高手指点我下，多谢!如何翻译好呢!

"Have you read the poem?"the girl asked.
"Yes,of couse,that poem is not bad, the author is talented."the Chinese teacher answered.
"The author is me."said the girl.
"Oh? You can have a try on this way,but do not delay your course",the teacher said indifferently.
The tears began to twinkle in the girl's eyes.

个人手译 仅供参考

The girl asked:"Did you read the poem?" The Chinese teacher said:"Yes. It is a good peom. The author has literary talent." The girl admitted:"It was written by me." "Was it?" The Chinese teacher said unconcernedly"You can develop yourself towards this direction. But do not influence your normal study." The girl's tears are in her eyes.

The girl asked, 'Have you seen the poem?' The Chinese teacher said, 'Already, the poem is quite well, the author is very talented.' The girl said, the poem was written by me.' &