大家看我这英文可有语法问题

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/20 09:16:05
today,life in the university or in the college is extremely memorable and i hope every academician can lead a colorful day during their collegial life

academician 你指大学生？用college students就行了。
I hope everyone enjoy his colorful day in the college.

Today, the experience of college life is very valuable and meaningful, so I hope every student can enjoy their time at college and lead a colorful life.