帮我看一下这篇英语文章在哪有错?谢谢

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帮我看一下这篇英语文章在哪有错?谢谢
My school
My name is ***.I am from HuaQiang school.My schoolvery big.It has some beautiful flowere,some very big.It some verymuch fish. Look! this is fish very fat. There are One thousand students in the school. My classroon very clean and very big. Miss Chen is My Cinese teacher. she very busy. I am in Class Tow Grade Six. My computer teacher is very young. She's Miss Xie. I am very happy in the HuaQiang school. do you like HuaQiang school?
错在哪?为什么错,请说出来哦~谢谢啦

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My school
My name is ***.I am from HuaQiang school.My schoolvery is big.It has some beautiful flowers,some are very big.It has much fish. Look! this fish is very fat. There are One thousand students in the school. My classroon is very clean and big. Miss Chen is my Chinese teacher. she is very busy. I am in Class Two Grade Six. My computer teacher is very young. She's Miss Xie. I am very happy in HuaQiang school. Do you like it?

你确定你把短文打好着?
好多单词都错了.每句都没系动词.
一般的怎么会是这种低级错误?