英语 麻烦看下哪些地方有错啊？不胜感激！

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During my past two years,taking the position of declarant in the first year , the position of declarant and vice manager of bussiness department the second.Familiar with the procedure of customs clearance of most of the goods,individually capable of the operation of the clearance of the import and export goods .Very careful and patient, proficient in English.Able to work independently!
我想在简历中用这段话，麻烦各位高手帮忙看一下啊，谢谢
谢谢哦！不过No problem with speaking in English. 要不要改一下呢？听说读写方面没有问题怎么说呢？
真羡慕你们英语那么好，以前觉得自己英语还可以的，现在好久不用都不知道怎样再把英语补好了，郁闷呀！
再请教下面证书这些怎么翻译呢？太感谢了
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感觉读起来很不对……
这样不伤筋动骨的改改算是将就了

In my past two years,I worked as a declarant in the first year , and took the position of declarant and Vice Manager of Bussiness Department in the following year. I'm familiar with the procedures of customs clearance,and I'm individually capable in clearancing import and export goods .I'm very careful and patient, and I'm also proficient in English. I firmly believe that I am able to work independently!

你这个 proficient in English 太夸张了点，我英语专业毕业都不敢这么讲-_-!

PS:楼上兄弟的修改很简洁明了。你可以就说Competent in English.

During my 2 years working career,I had taken position of declarant in the first year and the deputy manager in the second year.I have rich experience about the procedure of customs clearance,the operation of the clearance in import and export goods.No problem with speaking in English.
帮你改了下 你的话是翻译软件翻的吗？没一点水平啊 汗。。。还说英语好。。。不过老外应该能看懂 这是绝对正宗的中式英语

一共四句，每句都缺主语！其它没什么毛病了。