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Mary works at a bank.She begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working on five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home.Some people take the train.Some peoples take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.She walks,and walks ,and works,or works.
Mary lives eight miles from the bank.She walks for three hour.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home.He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed,Mary is tired.
She is eigty_two years old.
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begin →begins
on→at
Everybody goes to home. to 去掉
Some peoples take the bus。peoples → people
and works,or works. or →and
She walks for three hour.hour→hours
Mary is home.is → arrives
He eats dinner。He→She
she goes to the bed.the 去掉