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I believed that almost students have cell phone over years, and I also get my phone while I graduated from Grade 9. I was so excited and happy at that time, but actually, my parents were disagreeing that I use the cell phone. They thought to be a student I should focus on studying instead of spending time and attention on any other things; and on the other hand, it would be dangerous with a phone when you are just a kid, someone will rob you. However, for me, I thought that I should get a cell phone and everything will be fine.

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翻译成中文：我相信, 学生几乎有手机经过几年, 并且我并且得到我的电话当我从等级9 毕业了。我是很激动和愉快那时, 但实际上, 我的父母不同意我使用手机。他们认为是我应该集中于学习代替消费时间和注意在所有其它事的学生; 并且另一方面, 它会是危险的与电话当您是孩子, 某人将抢夺您。但是, 为我, 我认为, 我应该得到手机并且一切将是美好的。