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原文:Hellon,everyone!Today,I'm very glad to introduce myself to you here.
My name is Song xiaozhao.I'm thirteen years old.I'm in class three grade six.As you can see ,I have two small eyes,tow big ears and a big nose. I like swimming,skating and playing basketball,and in my spare time,I like listening to music and playing computer games.In addition, I love magazine.My favourite subject in school is Maths because it's very interesting. I have great interest in news reporting as well,and I am well-informed of the big news events both at home and abroad.
I never give up. I exert my efforts to do things well.
Hope you like me,thank you

Good morning/afternoon/evening(根据情况)everybody.I am so glad that i got this opportunity to introduce myself to you all. My name is Song xiaozhao and I am thirteen years old. I am in class 3 grade 6.As everybody can see that my eyes are quite small,but my ears and nose are quite big.Maybe i am not so good looking, but i have a kind heart. I have many hobbies, such as swimming, skating and playing basketball. When i am free, I always listen music and play computer games. You know what? I am really good at playing computer games. If anyone of you also like it, maybe oneday you can come to my home and we can play together.That must be fun! Besides those things, I love to read magazines.Reading can open my eyes and enhance my knowledge.We all know that there are many things we can't learn from our schoolbooks.So I also suggest you to read more. Also i have a grest deal of interets in news. I try to catch up with the world and make myself well informed about both domestic and internati