请帮忙看一下下文是否有错误？

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If one day, you don't feel like crying,call me. I don't promise that I'll make you laugh,but I can cry with you. If one day,you want to run away, call me. I don't promise to ask you to stop, but I can run with you . If one day ,you don't want to listen to anyone, call me . Ipromise to be there for you and I'll be very quiet. But if one day. you call, but there's no answer. Come fast to see me.
Perhaps I need you.请帮忙指出错误或换成更好的说法，并注明应该怎样改正！谢谢！

If one day,you feel like crying,call me.I will not be promise that I'll make you laugh,but i can cry with you.If one day,you want to run away, call me.I will not promise to ask you to stop.but I can run with you.If one day,you don't want to listen to anyone.call me.I promise to be there for you and I'll be very quiet.But one day,you call,but there are no answer.Come fast to see me.
Perhaps I need you.请帮忙指出错误或换成更好的说法,并注明应该怎样改正!谢谢!

个人感觉属于比较直白的CHINGLISH，最好重新都处理一下。

i don't promise 这段话因该是 i not sure 还有 i don't promise to ask you to stop 这句话因该是 i will not ask you to stop 还有 you don't want to listen to anyone 因该是 you don't feel like listening to anyone.

谢谢收看。。。。。。。