UC知道偶写的小段文....大家给看看...
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My name is xxx. I am a xxx. I have came to xxx for more than 3 years. I am studying at xxx international secondary school now.
I wish I can attend a US high school as an exchange student. I want to experience the part of the American culture which is different from my own culture, make lots of friends who have different backgrounds, races, and nationalities, and let more people know about xxx. This is why I want to go to American to study.
After exchange student program finished I will return to xxx and continue to study at xxx international secondary school. I’m planning to go to the University and study about economy in xxx.
重点语法上面的错误...第二段断句的方法对不对...是不是很难读？？....还有我有点不知道最后怎么结尾...........如果可以的话帮改一改...谢了...
写给美国大使的.......（轻度晕）
I wish I can attend a US high school as an exchange student. I want to experience the part of the American culture which is different from my own culture, make lots of friends who have different backgrounds, races, and nationalities, and let more people know about xxx. This is why I want to go to American to study.
After exchange student program finished I will return to xxx and continue to study at xxx international secondary school. I’m planning to go to the University and study about economy in xxx.
重点语法上面的错误...第二段断句的方法对不对...是不是很难读？？....还有我有点不知道最后怎么结尾...........如果可以的话帮改一改...谢了...
写给美国大使的.......（轻度晕）
I have came to xxx for more than 3 years
这句有问题 come这词不能用完成时啊 另外时态也不对(come过去分词是come) 当然这里不能用它 应该是 I have been here ...
I want to experience the part of the American culture which is different from my own culture, make lots of friends who have different backgrounds, races, and nationalities, and let more people know about xxx.
改成这样更顺一些:which is different from my own
并且这句话太不好看了 混乱~~~ 最好还是分开写
After exchange student program finished I will return to xxx and continue to study at xxx international secondary school
exchange student program前面我觉得要加THE
After ... is finished 应该是这样 加IS
这篇文是干什么用的呢 如果是演讲 结尾我能给提供的 大概是这样
I am really looking forward to it.
And thanks for listening.