英语高手进,求修改短文

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/11 02:22:57
I like the job of the foreground, is not a high pay and leisure work. I had ever studied physical education for two years. When I graduated later, I had worked an elementary school for half a year, which Make me feel myself not fit teacher, because I do not like the way of my life is unchangeable, which make me changes view of my life at the time, I pursue the ways of life which change continuously, so I chose the English subject, because I feel that English take up occupation of scope wider than the physical education. I want to learn from good English go abroad do the preparation, my grandfather and grandmother is U.S. citizen with ethnic Chinese, which make me go abroad very convenient. My temporary target can becomes a staff of member at National Gymnastic Committee.
Now, I am a student, it is important for you to study English. I just heighten myself discipline, I can pursue profession of my passion.
有语法错,有用词不当,请高手修改下,谢谢

说句不大中听的话,你的短文几乎句句有错.
想给你改都无从下手

相信你的文章是用软件翻译的,确实不象人话,搞不清你的原意,请你发中文上来吧,否则改完了可能跟你要表达的意思不一致.

就是啊,根本无从从改起。爱莫能助