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People should always stay together,so it is important that kind and understanding to a person in society.And how we can do to creat a friendly enviroment for us?
Dirst,we should have a honesty heart,because it can decide that you can have friends.The second,we should have some knowledge,because a man who have knowledge can manage their feeling findly.
If you can do like this situation,I believe you must a kind and understanding person.
I wish you can have a wonderful a wonderful life!
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高手帮忙看一看,把错误纠出来。
明天就要参加高考了,想再发现点问题解决掉.
谢谢大家了

People should always stay together,so it is important that kindness and understanding to a person in society.(1)
And how can we do to create a friendly enviroment for us? (2)
First,we should have an honesty heart,because it can decide whether you can have friends.(3)
The second,we should have some knowledge,because a man who has knowledge can manage his feeling findly. (2)
If you do like this situation,I believe you must be a kind and understanding person. (2)
I wish you can have a wonderful and wonderful life! (1)

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People always stay together, so understanding and kindness is very important to a person in society. And how can we creat a friendly environment for us?
First, we should have honest heart, because it decides whether you could have friends.
Second, we should have some knowledge, because a man with knowledge could manage his feeling well.
If you can do as above two points, I