哪位英语高手帮我两句句子改一下错?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/12 17:50:43
What’s wrong with the following paragraphs?

1.Nowadays, the problem of generation gap becomes more and more serious. Parents complained that children didn't show them proper respect and obedience, while children complained that their parents didn’t understand them at all.

2.In our daily life, we always complain of our parents’ misunderstanding. People of different generations are likely to have different views and responses on the same issues. There is a generation gap between children and their parents.
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两句句子都有错的~
这两个句子是我们老师带的学生写的论文中的病句,让我们当病句改错做来着~~~~~
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1.Nowadays, the problem of generation gap becomes more and more serious. Parents complained that children didn't show them proper respect and obedience, while children complained that their parents didn’t understand them at all.

becomes 应该用 is becoming;
两个 complained 应该用 complain
children didn't show 应该用 children do not show
parents didn’t understand 应该用 parents do not understand
在书面英语中,一般很少用don't, didn't, hasn't之类的缩略形式,反意疑问句除外。

2.In our daily life, we always complain of our parents’ misunderstanding. People of different generations are likely to have different views and responses on the same issues. There is a generation gap between children and their parents.

views or responses
on the same issue

1 didn't show them proper
show their ..

2 on the same issues
responses to the ...
complain of 没错

这两段话好像在哪儿看见过,是什么高考作文书上的吧

.In our daily life, we alway