一个外国朋友的来信该怎样回复？？？加分！！！

Hey, Mr.xxx:
My name is xxx, I lived in Beijing for xx years, I like Beijing, it is my home city. I think you'll like it too because Beijing is such a beautiful city.
When you come to Beijing, i suggest you to go shopping at Wangfujing, xxx, xxx. You can also go to xxxx, xxxx, xxx, xxxx for a tour.
I do like dogs/I don't like dogs. Dogs are really cute/some dogs are annoying, but I would like to try to have one.

译文：
你好，xxx先生：
我的名字叫xxx, 我在北京住了xxx年了。我很喜欢北京，她是我的家乡，你来了以后一定也会喜欢的，因为北京是一个很漂亮的城市。
当你来北京以后，我建议你去王府井，xxx, xxx购物，你也可以去 xxx, xxx ,xxx观光。
我喜欢狗/我不喜欢狗。狗很可爱/狗很吵，但是我不怕有一只狗。

把带xxx的地方填了，但后最后一段你选一个就行了。

全都是手写的！语法都正确哦~~

我不是北京人，你把中文给我，我来翻译