帮我看看这段英语有没有语法错误..(有悬赏)

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/12 14:56:04
London the North Atlantic Ocean warm current and the westerly wind influence, is the temperate zone marine climate, the four seasons temperature difference is small, summer is cool, the winter is warm, the air is moist, multi-drizzle, fall winter much worse.Average temperature in January is 4.5℃, in July is ℃, the year precipitation is about 1100 millimeters.

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原文是
伦敦受北大西洋暖流和西风影响，属温带海洋性气候，四季温差小，夏季凉爽，冬季温暖，空气湿润，多雨雾，秋冬尤甚。平均气温1月为4．5℃，7月为18℃，年降水量为1100毫米左右。

London the North Atlantic Ocean warm current and the westerly wind influence, is the temperate zone marine climate, the four seasons temperature difference is small, summer is cool, the winter is warm, the air is moist, multi-drizzle, fall winter much worse.Average temperature in January is 4.5℃, in July is ℃, the year precipitation is about 1100 millimeters.

翻译后：
伦敦北大西洋暖流和西风影响,是温带海洋气候,四季温差小,夏季清凉,冬季温暖,空气湿润,多细雨,秋冬更糟.平均气温1月4.5 ℃ ,在7 ℃ ,年降水量约为1100毫米.