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后天英语课要上台去讲.一部分自已写的.怕有语法错误,请帮我修改一下,或者告诉我一种更好的表达方法.谢谢~

Today I want to told something about global warming.Global warming is an increase in the earth's temperature, which can be caused by the use of fossil fuels, and industrial or agricultural processes.And global warming will result in the iceberg in the two poles unfreeze.With the iceberg unfreeze,the coastline will raise. Some cities near the sea will be flooded,maybe these cities include your hometown.Global warming is an extremely severe problem facing the world today.

Many ordinary people, however, believe they have nothing to do with it. No matter one's opinion on the matter, we should still take action to improve the quality of the air we breathe in our cities. Riding bicycles more often, using public transportation and planting trees on Arbor Day are all ways that we can pitch in. Think carefully about what you can do. Besides changing your own way of life, you can also influence the people arou

Good morning,everyone.The subject of my duty report is global warming.

Global warming means the earth's temperature has an increase, which can be caused by the use of fossil fuels, and industrial or agricultural processes.And global warming will result in the iceberg in the two poles unfreeze.With the unfreezing of iceberg ,the coastline would raise. Some cities near the sea will be flooded,which maybe including your hometown.Global warming is an extremely severe problem we should pay more attentions.

Many people, however, believe the global warming has nothing serious to their daily life. Whatever your opinion is, we should still take action to improve the quality of the air which we breathed everyday. Riding bicycles more often, using public transportation and planting trees are all good ways that we can pitch in. The improvement of the environment need your participation. Besides changing your own life style, you can also influence the people around you